Why You Should Create Headlines First & Content Second

by Brett Borders on June 10, 2009

An amazing film or magazine article can overcome a bad title. But online content with a bad headline will never get clicked on — let alone quickly Dugg or retweeted. The overabundance of good web content leaves people with little attention to spare on anything but the most tempting, succulent descriptions.

Wait for the epiphany where the perfect headline appears “in lights,” then go write your viral piece.

Too often… when working with friends and clients on viral content ideas… we’d get excited about a cool concept that can’t easily be expressed in under 65-or-so characters and then spend hours creating the content. As a very last step, they turn to the headline box and struggle to come up with something even passably awkward. Inevitably, the piece bombed… and left them with a terrible social media hangover after all that hard, creative work. Many repeated disappointments inspired me to change my workflow:

Brainstorm a list of incredible, magnetic headlines first. Once you have a stash of golden, “sure-fire winner” headlines, then go create the content that unquestionably fulfills the promise made by each of them.

Not every “cool” content concept has potential for a winning headline. By finding that out first, and then eliminating the ideas that are unlikely to be clicked on and shared – you can focus your energy on creating hit content for those headlines that do have a fighting chance.

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  • Well, before I read your article I'd have said this was BACKWARDS. But then after you've described it here at least I do get that readers will never click on your article to begin with unless it's a good hook. I still do believe that you should WRITE the article before the headline, but different strokes for different folks (grin).
  • Marrichl,

    Getting people to click is a huge part of the battle. Most content from less-popular sources fails because people don't click.
  • I think I'd go with a mix of your and Stuart Foster's comment. It's pretty solid advice if your main goal is to be Dugg (Digged?) or RT. Yet I'd also say that if the content is great it will get shared anyway, regardless of title. And if you always go for the title first, then you could limit yourself in what the content actually says.
  • Danny,

    If I had more space I'd of called this post "Why You Should Create Headlines First and Content Second, When Viral Marketing" - but I wanted to leave some room for it to travel if the spirit moved it ;)

    I think if people know you and your brand, the merit of the content speaks for itself much more easily... and coming up with headlines first can be very restrictive and limit the outpouring of ideas.
  • Now THAT's a title, mate!! ;-)
  • I agree that head lines are important , but they should have the proper keywords in the title too for SEO purposes and long term traffic. Your examples given in the comment are great on that regard having the keywords while giving a descriptive title. I feel too often blogger go for controversial titles because of the quick traffic ignoring the long term SEO benefits
  • Nishadha,

    You are totally right, that keywords are ultra important for long-term traffic and too many blogers don't spend time on SEO - including me on this blog. I've been really interested in writting posts for Twitter - I only have one or two posts that pull good search traffic. :(

    But especially for SEO, I think the same general principle applies... it helps to find keywords / write the titles first... and then write the content second - after you know what is going to be valuable to write about.

    Thanks for the reminder!
  • Yeah,
    good idea! We should spend more time on our headlines!

    Thanks for this advice!
  • Chillout Music,

    They'll make you or break you, in my experience. Especially if your blog doesn't have a huge following yet... sometimes you get judged on the headline alone.

    p.s. What was the best chillout album of the last year for you? I really liked Warp Technique / "Make Animals Happy" and Easily Embarrassed / "Idyllic Life"
  • A very useful reminder, especially for those of us weaned on print, and the inevitable puns which usually don't translate to online.

    I'm intrigued to see my latest blog post (http://someonenicer.wordpress.com) got highest number of hits so far and am wondering if it's as simple as having 'Versace' in the title. Are there some 'power words' that people respond to in the same way they're more likely to linger if there's a picture of an attractive woman (we're told!)?

    So we have a new take on the 'picture being worth a thousand words' that we journos were brought up on. A tempting headline is worth a thousand tweets when it comes to getting read.
  • Jane,

    You're right... newspaper-style print puns usually don't work in the ruthless, click-or-die world online...

    I think there are some power words, but it mostly boils down to the ability of a headline to create burning interest or promise some kind of benefit your target audience is interested in.
  • For the Digg, short-attention span world this works extremely well. However, this approach can't work for all articles...what about case studies, innovative new ways of thinking or hashing out existing ideas more thoroughly?
  • Stuart,

    I agree with you totally. This isn't a commandment, and it certainly
    doesn't apply to all content. But I I do strongly recommend this if
    you're spending hours on something in hope it'll go hot on Digg or
    Twitter. I've seen too much
    totally awesome content FAIL because the BBC or blogger guy rushed the
    headline... and too many crap articles that get lots of clicks because
    the headline is sexy.
  • Headlines and titles are so important. I used to work in PR and this is also really relevant for subject lines in an email. That's almost what can make or break the information you're trying to send along.

    I'm very much an idea person, so I know the content is there but sometimes I think about it and realize that I'm not sure what to title my blog post, etc. I think focusing on the headline is important and I like the tips you've featured. Thanks!
  • Grace,

    Headlines are ultra-important for PR - although I'd wager that people are more likely to at least click on an e-mail that seems to be targeted to them (and then quickly delete it if it looks like a pitch) - rather than one of the many random links on their Twitter flow or Digg screen (most will never be clicked on).

    One good e-mail headline temple that seems to work well for my linkbuilding / blogger outreach work is using THEIR headlines - "re: Title-of-Article-They've-Written" - which is a headline that clearly rings a bell and is urgently meaningful and recognizable to them.. and start the dialogue with commentary on that piece - saving my own pitch for the second contact, usually.

    I find it gets a higher response rate than anything that sounds remotely like a pitch in the initial subject line of an e-mail.

    Know any good e-mail headlines for contacting busy, harassed bloggers and editors?
  • I totally agree. Too many time i have finished linkbait to write the title to find out that I should have started the other way around.
  • Dugdale,

    that is always the worst feeling... it can be downright depressing... really throw my mood off and make me think I could have channeled that energy into something with a little more kick to it! Live and learn.
  • I have this issue fixed now. I have a list of linkbait ideas, and for each idea I write down who I think the target audience is and what the pitch (or title) should be before i start. This helps a ton of deciding what to work on first (I have a long list).
  • I agree completely.

    Headline is always the hardest part to write for me and I ALWAYS save it for last. I am man enough to admit I am terrible at headlines. Also terrible at writing but that's a comment for another blog.
  • Chris,

    I've had the same problem too. For years. I started to get really aggravated at spending on content that didn't "click" because of headline and try brainstorming killer titles first. Usually my process is .... get an loose idea.... get stoked about it... wait until I can see a perfect headline with flashing lights and 500+ Diggs next to it.. and then sit down and crank it out.

    If ti's not an important piece that takes a lot of time, I'll give it much less thought.
  • Brett--That makes sense. Seems I do it in reverse, without much structure and as the thoughts come to me. Then I do a tweet title that covers what I wrote about. Could you check out this one below and suggest something more catchy? I'd like to repost it soon for greater effect, as the post is a fun and different than what I see from other wedding photographers out there.

    Here is my tweet on it:

    "You May Kiss the Bride"-top 5 ways to help shoot great 1st kiss. http://bit.ly/LhdwK #boulder #wedding photographer #bride #photo

    Enjoyed your post--keep up the great work!

    Marc
    Marc Littmann Photography
    www.littmannweddings.blogspot.com
  • Marc,

    This is a perfect example... exactly the problem I run into... a very cool content concept that is hard to express in a handful of words.

    I like the "kiss the bride" hook you are working with, but I'd instinctively drop "You may" as dead weight and add a clarifying informational benefit. These are my quick ideas, the top one being the best and then descending to the worst at the bottom.

    How to Kiss the Bride in a Wedding Photo
    How to Kiss the Bride: Photogenic Wedding Portrait Tips
    How to Kiss the Bride & Make it Look Good on Camera
    6 Wedding Kiss Tips for a Great Wedding Portrait
    How to Make Your Wedding Kiss Look Good on Camera


    Awesome job on the article!
  • Thanks, Brett--appreciate your help!

    marc
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